DESCRIBE A PERSONE

Lamia is a cheerful,outgoing,sweet,crazy girl,who happened to be my best friend ever !!
lamita ,as i always like to call her ,is a tiny girl with  dark curly long hair and beautiful brown eyes .she´s my friend since childhood,in which we had great times together and  led crazy adventures in  our tiny imaginary world .However Lamia may seem crazy but she´s that kind of people who give it all to you without waiting any thing from you,she´s the person to relay on when the whole world let you down ,so basically she is my angel and the sister that i always wanted.





PEER RESPONSE
I feel really identified with your paragraph! I think that everyone in the world have a friend that means the same as lamia to you.
Anyway dear writer I´ll try to make you improve your paragraph a bit,but it will be difficult since you write in a marbles way.
When i read your paragraph ,the first thing i really miss is a powerful conclusion sentence, nevertheless your actual one is good but I believe that u would make it better if you put ,for instant a rhetoric exclamation such as "i love you lamia";On the other side you may add more supporting sentences to make your paragraph even more stronger.
Finally I only want to thank you because your text really made me remember my best friend and all the good memories about us and our childhood.

SPACE DEBRIS

       

       Nowadays Space debris are considered as a serious danger threaten the future of our planet. this space debris or space junk is caused by  Human. most of these space junk consist in satellites and also  The rockets that launch these satellites become space junk too. Nevertheless these space junk objects may cause a serious damage on earth. which mean , Even very small objects can cause a lot of destruction.

       

         This junk space is hazardous but it differs from natural meteoroid threat in several important aspects. First, space debris remains in earth orbit during its entire lifetime and not a transient phenomenon like  meteoroid,so makes permemts danger on earth..Some space junk falls back toward Earth, and most of it burns up in the atmosphere before it reaches the ground. ahowever Due to the speed of Space junk , even a small object can cause a lot of damage.

      
        So we must find a solution to this issue quickly or we will face a huge catastrophe sooner than we expect.